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Sam van Zweden

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A Wheely Exciting Program!

Yeah, that pun again. That old chestnut. Oh, but it is! The Wheeler Centre’s September-November program came out today, and it’s HUGE. I’m just going to go through what’s on in the next month, because that’s quite enough excitement for one day. And the start of October, because if you snooze you’ll loose on these tickets.

The big one, the one I’m almost TOO excited about, is that Jonathan Safran Foer is coming to town. (Right, now go and get a towel to wipe up the saliva that you just dripped on the keyboard.
Good.)
He’ll be here on the 2nd of October, and I’m up to petition for a bit group hug, if anyone’s interested, I’m pretty sure JSF will be down for that.

But it doesn’t stop there.  On the 15th of September, the folks from Meanjin will be arguing about what the “Great Australian Novel” is, this time with a special focus on books by women.

On the 29th of September the Lunchbox Soapbox is given over to the enigmatic EZB, who will be speaking in defence of slam poetry.

On the 30th of September, a HUGE bunch of awesome people (including Marieke Hardy, need I say more) share their teen-angst diaries in “No One Understands Me“.

What’s also great is how many big red “BOOKED OUT” stickers there are on the events website already. Melbourne offers SO many great things to do, and people are excited about going to literary events, so much that they sell out. That in itself is Wheely exciting.

A Month of Reading

It’s the first day of spring! Spring means cleaning, particularly our balcony, which is full of beer bottles from last summer which are all filled now with spiders and eggs from anything that crawls. Spring means reading outdoors, often with a beer or tea, on said cleaned balcony. Spring means leaving the house in things cut above my knees.

According to today’s sky, spring means muddy yellow skies. Today’s sky is a liar.

Here’s my last month of reading. I managed to buy only one book, which (if you look at previous months) is quite a rarity for me… I read four books, and have a HEAP of stuff out from the library to help with my novel research. I started a book-swap group which went well for about a week, then promptly died off. It was fun while it lasted, and I managed to swap two books I had multiples of for books I wanted.

What did you read this month?

 

Books Bought:
A Visit From the Goon Squad, by Jennifer Egan

Library:
Olive Kitteridge, by Elizabeth Strout
Reading like a writer: A guide for people who love books and for those who want to write them, by Francine Prose
Forty-Seventeen, by Frank Moorhouse
Adverbs, by Daniel Handler
Fast Healthy (Women’s Weekly Cookbook)
Cook Yourself Thin, Harry Eastwood et al.

 

Swapped:
Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen (out)
Unreliable Memoirs, by Clive James (out) <– don’t judge me, I have three copies.
The Plague, by Albert Camus (in)
Read This Next, by Sarah Newman & Howard Mittelmark (in) 

Books Read:
Reality Hunger, by David Shields
Lucky, by Alice Sebold
City of Glass, by Paul Auster
Ghosts, by Paul Auster

Currently Reading:
Consolations of Philosophy, by Alain de Botton
The Little Red Writing Book, by Mark Tredinnick
Eating Animals, by Johnathan Safran Foer
Olive Kitteridge, by Elizabeth Strout

Overload Call-Out for Volunteers

It’s almost that time again – only a few weeks until the 10th Overload Poetry Festival starts.

They’re looking for volunteers for front of house –  this is a great way to meet some really lovely people and make some poetry scene connections. And you get to see a bunch of really great gigs for free. GO!

I’m Listening

I just finished reading a piece by Margaret Atwood, in which she says that by “listening to the stories of others, we learn to tell our own.”

I suspect this idea is what’s at the heart of the music I listen to while I’m writing, planning, jotting, or blogging. In this music is always some really pure sort of story-telling; something linear and narrative; and something which gets to the reasons that I write.

There’s study music, but that’s muted. It’s Howard Shore, it’s Michael Nyman – it’s anything with uplifting violins and some fast-fingered key work. There’s never, ever any lyrics – my academic essay-writing brain needs near silence. Sometimes total silence. Study music exists, but I don’t know that it has any real impact on what I write. Unless my philosophy essay starts raising questions about women having their fingers chopped off with axes, and then I turn Michael Nyman off.

The actual soundtrack for my writing is a different matter. It has words, and this somehow helps my own words come. At certain times, usually when I make the move from planning to writing, I need silence. But after I’ve got that really hard bit down and the cursor’s done some work munching up the page, then I can introduce music.

They say that smell is our most powerful memory motivator. I think that sound – in the form of music – is a close second. Certain songs or albums (yes, albums – don’t you dare accuse me of belonging to a generation for whom albums are dead!) can bring back whole seasons or time periods for me. Summer 2003, Good Charlotte. Summer 2006, Johnny Cash and The Hives. And it’s not just that I can pinpoint the time, it can actually bring back feelings from the time that I listened to it. I can no longer listen to a lot of the music that I really clung to during periods of depression, because I find myself feeling it all over again.

Likewise, songs and albums attach to short stories and poems. Pieces of work acquire their own soundtracks. And those soundtracks always have something in common – they’re lyrical (for want of a better word – no pun intended), and they’re narrative. By listening to these stories, I’m learning how to tell my own.

Right now I’m listening to a lot of Wil Wagner. His lyrics focus on the heady feeling of rushing through life, and the tiny details we hold onto. He’s a natural story-teller. I’ve also just started listening to Bright Eyes again, particularly the “Cassadaga” album – it still holds the memory of some summer in its sound, but it’s bringing a really important lightness into my work. Josh Pyke is another favourite for story-telling abilities. His song are artful, tiny stories. Narratives that can be consumed in around three minutes. If I could write such full, rounded stories which could be consumed in that time frame, I’d be happy.

Listening to this kind of music keeps my prose lyrical, and it also reminds me that while I can string together a pretty sentence or two, they need to go somewhere. They’re part of a story.

Even beneath this is the fact that these song-writers, through their stories, are doing something important, and it’s what I’m doing too. They’re trying to communicate something right at the centre of themselves. In Bright Eyes’ “Bowl of Oranges”, he meets a doctor “who appeared in quite poor health / I said there’s nothing I can do for you / you can’t do for yourself / he said yes you can, just hold my hand / I think that that would help” – it’s not just the doctor, it’s not just Bright Eyes, it’s all of us. In creating things, we’re trying to connect. As David Foster Wallace said, “Fiction’s about what it is to be a fucking human being,” and part of that is to be a bit stuck inside yourself. By creating things, we’re bridging the gap. By listening to other people’s stories while I write, I’m reminded that this gap-bridging exercise is not for nothing.

EVENTS! My goodness, EVENTS!

There’s just SO much coming up – my credit card’s getting a decent workout. As is the bit of my brain that controls excitement. I’d almost go as far as saying I’m perpetually excited by all the tickets I’ve got and things that are coming up.

Broadly speaking – two festivals. Melbourne Writers Festival and Overload Poetry Festival. MWF starts tomorrow, and Overload runs from the 9-17th of September.

Excited about the following:

– Tomorrow night’s keynote speech and opening of Melbourne Writers Festival by Jonathan Franzen, and general opening frivolities and Melbourne Town Hall.

Liner Notes, 3rd September – always a thoroughly entertaining night where spoken word artists “cover” (write on the theme of) a particular album. I’m not a huge INXS fan, but I am a fan of the people involved in the event – Emilie Zoey Baker, Omar Musa, Catherine Deveny, Ben Pobjie… The list goes on. And The Toff in Town is a great venue for these kind of writing events, so it promises to be a great night.

–  Melbourne Poetry Map launch – 15th September, at Loop Bar. Last year’s event was really fun, they had a huge range of poets on places that were familiar, and some that weren’t so familiar. This year ten new poets have been commissioned to do ten new poems about ten new places around our fair city – poets include Luka Lesson, Amy Bodossian, Joel McKerrow, Geoff Lemon, and other boys and girls who kick poetry’s butt on a regular basis.

– This is the big one. Shane Koyczan. If you know the fellow and hadn’t yet heard, I apologize if I just made you wet yourself. He’s doing a few gigs in Melbourne – one is some sort of science and rationalism conference at Jeff’s Shed on the 18th, tickets are about $300 and his set is only half an hour. I’m sticking with the two other gigs he’s doing, with Overload. He’ll be at the Tell It Like It Is slam on Friday 16th September, and also at the Overload closing night at the Fitzroy Town Hall on the 17th. Tickets for the closing night are available online, so get onto it, you don’t want to miss this man – the closing event also has a huge lineup of our own Melbourne poets.

If you don’t know Shane Koyczan, try this on for size. Sorry about the uncontrollable crying you’re about to do. Let’s remedy that with some uncontrollable laughing from this one. And just for good measure, this one is one of my favourites. If you watch these and feel as strongly as I do about the man’s brilliance, I’ll catch you at the gigs on the 16th and 17th. (We can talk about how we *completely* dig Degrassi!)

Jane Eyre film review

JANE EYRE
Released: March 11, 2011
120 mins
Directed by Cory Fukunaga

On what terms can we judge a film adaptation of a well-loved book?  Surely the film is an artistic work in itself and should be judged on its own merits? However much I like this sentiment, I think that there’s no way of utterly separating the source text, and that to judge a film adaptation of a book on its own terms means, at least partly, to judge it in reference to that book. Cory Fukunaga’s 2011 adaptation of Charlotte Bronte’s (1847) Jane Eyre is certainly a decent film, but when placed in the context of the much-loved book and the many, many film and television adaptations, it doesn’t fare quite so well.

For those who have never read the novel, what follows is a brief outline of the story:
Jane Eyre is a poorly-treated orphan girl, sent by her aunt to Lowood, a girls’ school where she is treated badly. Years later, Jane leaves Lowood to teach a young girl in the home of Mr Edward Rochester. Though he originally presents as cold-hearted and cruel, Rochester and Jane form a close bond. This is strengthened through the strange happenings at Thornfield Hall, where disembodied voices and shadows float around, fires start from nowhere and violent attacks happen in the middle of the night. Rochester eventually proposes marriage to Jane, who accepts, but is heartbroken when she finds out that Rochester had already taken a wife fifteen years ago – a wife who turned out to be insane, and who Rochester kept locked in his attic. Jane flees Thornfield Hall, running across the moors, and eventually finds a home with kind people who allow her to live an anonymous post-heartbreak life.

Jane Eyre being such a seminal text, I’ll assume that what follows are not spoilers – the people Jane happens upon after traipsing across the moors for days and nights are, coincidentally enough, her cousins. This part of the book is particularly dense and boring, but it serves a purpose. We all feel a bit relieved when she returns to Rochester, refusing to marry her dull, overly pious cousin.

Rochester, meanwhile, has had his mad wife to contend with. She has burned down Thornfield Hall, committed suicide, and Rochester is now alone and crippled. Jane returns to him after hearing his voice calling on the wind, and a touching reunion follows.

Fukunaga’s Jane Eyre starts off on the wrong foot entirely by messing with the chronology of Bronte’s story. The cousins are no longer cousins, just helpful strangers (more realistic, certainly), and Jane’s appearance at their house is the beginning of the film; the point from which we flash back to tell most of the story. This gives the not-cousins far more importance than they need and is a strange starting point.

This is a very short telling of this story – many renditions of Jane Eyre have been television mini-series, and Bronte’s book itself isn’t exactly a quick read. At 120 minutes runtime, there simply doesn’t seem enough time to properly build relationships. When Jane’s only childhood friend died, I felt nothing. Not even “Oh, that’s a pity”. It didn’t feel at all like an event which would impact Jane and her way of thinking for the rest of her life – and if it’s portrayed in a way that I don’t care enough about, why even include it in the film? If liberties can be taken with other parts of the story, why not this one?

Relationships which matter more than Jane and Helen are equally as unconvincing – the main problem seems to be that the plot consists solely of main events, with none of the glue between to make it all believable. Take Jane and Rochester, the central pair. Other than a little “falling-in-love” montage after Rochester has confessed his love for Jane, the two only interact at traumatic times and even then in a stilted way – the depth of their feelings for one another doesn’t seem possible after the amount and nature of interaction suggested in the film.

Aside from qualms with the screenplay itself, Jane Eyre is mostly well-executed. It is cast well, with incredibly strong actors. The lovely Australian Mia Wasikowska is made to look suitably plain as Jane, which is quite a feat. Her acting is subtle, and she embodies the small yet strong-willed proto-feminist Jane perfectly – one of the best portrayals of the character that has been done. Michael Fassbender as Rochester is a bit of a re-imagined Rochester, but one which is permissible – he is far less stern than Bronte’s Rochester, possessing the same quick wit but also an overarching sense of humour and kindness. An altogether more likeable Rochester than any I’ve seen or read before.

I was disappointed by Fukunaga’s approach to the gothic elements of the story, as they’re so central to Bronte’s novel. There seems to be, in the film, no sense of menace behind any of the strange and supernatural-feeling occurances at Thornfield Hall. All the bumps in the night occur in isolation, with no music or particularly eerie lighting – perhaps Fukunaga was aiming for a realistic kind of menace, but it seems to have fallen flat.

The locations and sets are all overwhelmingly pretty and convincing – the moors, of course, are the only thing Jane could possibly walk across with her heartbreak, but the old houses that were used, particularly Thornfield Hall, is decked out with great attention to detail and a lack of exaggeration. The rooms of Thornfield Hall are grand, yes, but exactly no grander than they should have been for a man of Rochester’s standing – the rugs are the right size, the glass wear is nice but not too nice.

Within this particular screenplay of the story, Fukunaga has produced a good film. However, the writing itself leaves characters not fully formed, and questions as to the sense of the action hover over it. It works on its own turf, but up against the whole Jane Eyre oeuvre, a little disappointing.

Nonfiction

“The roominess of the term nonfiction: an entire dresser labeled nonsocks.”

– From David Shields’ Reality Hunger

JOMAD – I Heard You Like Books?

This morning I’ve started the day really, really well. By listening to Jojo Jakob’s and Maddie Crofts’ new podcast, JOMAD – I Heard You Like Books.

They’re funny, they’re thoughtful, they’re having the conversations you like the have with your friends. They out their own trashy reading, discuss their guilty pleasures, and the ways it’s hard to keep track of what you’d like to read, and what you thought of what you have read. They’ve inspired me to get back on the reviewing on here, and, more simply, to get more reading done today.

And hey publishers who are reading this, Jodie Kinnersley needs a job. Hire her.

A Month of Reading

It’s the end of the month again!

 

Books Bought:
Lucky, by Alice Sebold
Now Write! Nonfiction, edited by Sherry Ellis
Reality Hunger, by David Shields
The Gathering, by Anne Enright
Black Swan Green, by David Mitchell
Human Smoke: The Beginnings of World War II, the End of Civilization, by Nicholson Baker

Library:
Cat’s Eye, by Margaret Atwood
What Would Your Character Do? By Eric Maisel
The Landscape of Desire, by Kevin Rabalais

Gifted:
Triptych Poets Issue One
Caught In The Breeze: 10 Essays, by various authors. (I won a Blemish Books prize from Express Media for my effort at Blackout poetry – thanks guys!)
Eating Animals, by Johnathan Safran Foer

Books Read:
Consider the Lobster, by David Foster Wallace
Nick & Norah’s Infinite Playlist, by Rachel Cohn & David Levithan
New Moon, by Stephenie Meyer
The Lovely Bones, by Alice Sebold

Currently Reading:
Consolations of Philosophy, by Alain de Botton
The Little Red Writing Book, by Mark Tredinnick
Lucky, by Alice Sebold
Reality Hunger, by David Shields

 

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